So I just wanted to say I am so proud of myself. :) I started reading Violet, my first book of the series, again and WOW! The best thing you can do is take a break from your book and go back and read it. It needs a lot of tuning up and it's easier to see the flaws when it's not still so fresh in your mind. So now I read and I can say, "What the heck was I trying to say?" or "I didn't complete this sentence," etc. It's great!
Hooray for me. (Pat on the back.) :D Hooray for revisions!